Showing posts with label shermaine. Show all posts
Showing posts with label shermaine. Show all posts

Wednesday, September 29, 2010

< Self Reflections >

           Well, I think as time goes, my confidence to stand in front of the class to speak out loud is there. Even though it might as good as I want, but somehow it is better compared to the 1st time I was called out to talk. My legs are not shiver anymore, and I able to overcome the fear. But, there are times I have no idea what am I talking about when I speak in front of the crowd. Plus, sometimes I lack of idea what to talk even though I had practice many times before the presentation starts.

            However, I am still finding the best answer to a way to get the audience (my dear classmates) attention to listen to my speech in a humour meanwhile with a fruitful content of my speech.Actually I am looking forward for the next presentation as I want to see how much I have improve so far as practice makes PERRRRRRfecttt! !...

            Therefore, I have to realise my gestures and eye contact to the audiences too. Sometimes I realise that I do not have much eye contact with audience as I tend to look at one person at the time only.Basically I think that's all because till the end of the day a perfect speech came from the hard work and mistakes being done form time to time. no matter how hard Miss Cheryl had thought me but i dint put it in my mind and do it, no point of her teaching me! so watching other people mistakes is my mistakes too, because i might did the same thing without realising it !So that's all about my self reflection. =)

Saturday, September 25, 2010

the reviews of the persuasive speech

sarah- well..sarah topic was stop texting while driving is dangerous. well, her topic was fine just that she lack of expression and if she has varies her voice during presentation, it will be good.

ian- ian can present well if he watch out his posture and stands properly. his topic is good, but and again, he shall speak out loud with confidence so that he can persuades his audience well.

bonnie- if bonnie is more well prepapre for her speech, then her whole presentation will be great. her posture and voice projection is good enough and of cause she has all the expression . so its good. just a lilttle mistakes that she did not prepapre a good topic in other to persuades people about her topic.

hau neng- well, hau neng has the ability to persuades people. so overall his voice and posture was fine. but if he can stay at one position at a time it will be great. as i relaise he move too much at times.. but overall he did a great job.

take all this as compliment for some and some take this as for to improve urself k!

thats all i can remember .lol =)

Monday, September 20, 2010

And here it goes,, my survey questions..

AGE:                                                     GENDER:
TITLE: PRINTED NEWSPAPER SHOULD BE ABOLISHED!

1) What the word newspaper means to you? What is your perception towards newspaper?


2) What do you think about the content of the newspaper?

3)Do you read newspaper? If yes, how often do you read newspaper?

4)Do you trust the newspaper content? Why?

5)In your opinion, should newspaper exist? Why?

newspaper should be abolished!! thats my persuasive title.

When u hear the word newspaper, you will probably tell me the ‘is a source of news, creditable news, media that brings a lot of information and so forth.’

However, due to the advanced technology nowadays less people will actually read the printed newspaper but instead will go for other resources like radio, television and so forth. So doesn’t u think is it a waste to print few thousands of newspapers but sadly to see that, less people actually read newspaper nowadays. To the worst extend, people don’t read newspaper at all.

However, the newspaper content is so dull, and the quality of the paper is so bad that can actually torn after is wet by water. However, most of the news in the printed newspaper is the same with the online resources, so why a person shall waste money to buy a copy of newspaper whereby they can actually read from internet for free!

However, a newspaper may provide much news to the public, but the way the news reported is in a very brief surface and sometimes, the news may lead people in the different point of view too.

So isn’t it the newspaper should be abolished as it wastes the nature resources of the earth. So I do support that newspaper isn’t good and should be ABOLISHED!

Sunday, August 29, 2010

Aileena award speech

As we all know.. Aileena is a person who can speaks well in front of a huge crowd. And this is what i admired about here. She can just present anything well. So for the award presentation, Aileena was nominated as the dramatic mother.. and of cause, she can bring out the dramatic mother role very well.. So I would say she did a great job that day. Her acting was fine and it would be better if she can be more motherly like more scolding scene and lower down her tone of voices, so that the motherly could be seen more lively.
And for her gesture movements, I think it was fine.

And again, I would like to say that aileena have done a good job eventhough she do not the motherly look but she able to carried it out. So just keep up the good work!

Wednesday, August 18, 2010

comments on jasnitha for the transitional presentation

First and foremost, everyone is not born to be a speaker, whereby there have the confidence, courage and has lots of topics which is endless to talk about.Therefore, sometimes people will feel shy, scare or nervous when hundreds of eyes are on us!

So, what i want to comment about Jasnitha was, she is nervous or perhaps the combination of shy. But i know Jasnitha can even do better! When she scolds.. she can scold! Haha. So why not treat the presentation as someone you hate and bring out the courage and get rid of the fear away when present! Like for example, when all the students were given 1 minute to talk, she dint talk much and the presentation just ends like that. So since this is the presentation skills, all of us have to speak out loud! I know Jas has tried her best to present! But somehow, is still not enough! so..and again, speak out, and this is how it works~

cheers,
shermaine

Thursday, August 12, 2010

comment on bonnie

Bonnie uses her HTC handphone to represent herself. Handphone of course has many functions where everyone nowadays depends on it to communicate and sends messages. And she relates of the importance of the handphone to herself. It is very true when i need help, not only me but other people too, she will help when it is within her ability too.

So when the moment she says it, she really shows her expression and emotions, so it do shows the sincerity of her to help people.Therefore, she also says that the handphone has many buttons where it represents she has many friends.

However, if she able to add more varieties in her speeches as she is a really funny person, I think her speech will be great! so keep up the good humour in you Bonnie~!