Comment on Vivian

Vivian talked about the eyeliner to represent herself. In my opinion, I can see that she'd did some preparations before the presentation from the way she presents her speech about the eyeliner. However, I noticed that Vivian was still quite nervous when she was presenting in front until she run out of ideas to talk. Besides, Vivian did cross her legs while presenting but once she noticed about it she will automatically uncrossed it. She did quite well but I expect her to perform much better than this as she can speak very fluently in many kind of language and she's very creative. I think after a few more presentations, she will be able to overcome the stage fright, be more confident and would definitely perform well.

comment on han en

i am gonna comment on han en (:

obviously she did her preparation before she start her speech

it's very clear and she actually related everything of an Ipod to herself

Ipoh has a shuffle mode and she related it to the random her (;

it's very creative

for me , she did a very good job as she also got a good feedback from Ms.Cherly

han en take this speech very serious

she even told me she was so nervous and didn't know what to talk about

but she came up with an awesome idea

and seriously , i love it :D

keep this attitude han en , you gonna be a successful person because of this.

♥

Comment About Amelia *Nothing Personal* ^^

Before starting off my critic, I would like to take this opportunity to make a brief explanation about COM2115 is where I learn my presentation skill which is lectured by Ms. Cheryl who is a well know ed lecturer in INTI. It was a great pleasure being reunited with her after being teached by her for Law and Research paper. In the 1st week itself for presentation class we were made to make a brief speech regarding something significant part of us or relating to us.14 people which included me made the speech and were told to choose a person upon doing the speech and criticize them, the person that I choose is Amelia who in my opinion has a potential to be a good speaker but started off her 1st presentation by saying that she had nothing to say, which indicates she was not prepared when called upon or in this case spontaneous speech.

Putting the nervous factor beside she did made to come up with a significant part of her which was the necklace but she was very casual upon giving the presentation, it can be seen that she was pretty nervous like everyone else as well. Her standing position showed that she was relaxed and was more like having a casual talk with friends. By the ending off the speech im pretty sure that all of us came to know that she is a very sentimental person, overall all of us who made the speech had mistake's all over the place in my opinion and this where Ms.Cheryl will guide to improve us and make us a good speaker if possible in the future.

Miracle Worker by Taylor Mali

The speech is given by Taylor Mali, a slam poetry perfomer from New York City. The video entitled as Miracle Worker tells about the profession about teacher. He is a former teacher in a boys school. And now he is conducting workshops for teachers and students all over the world.

In my opnion, he looks very confident on what he is talking about. As we can see, he have no notes in his hands. That shows that he clearly know on what he is talking about. He is talking about his profession of teacher and what does a teacher do. Since he is former teacher he have no problem in telling the audience about his experiences.

He is not afraid to make jokes and during the speech the audience enjoyed his joke and gets what he trying to say. He looks very confortable on the stage in front of large crowds. The way he delivering the speech is very interesting as we can the tone he used from low pitch to a higher ptich. He grabs the attention of the audience very well. I personally feels that this is very entertaining and interesting.

Comment on Shermaine:)

My friend, Shermaine talked about her handphone and how it relates to herself. Well, first she started of saying that she always has a strap on her handphone, it shows that her parents are always very protective over her. For example, she wouldn't let her drive. Then, she said that her mood is always on and off, just like the on and off button and that her handphone has many buttons which means she has a lot of siblings and they will always be there to help her whenever she needs them.

In my opinion, Shermaine actually did quite well, and her feedback from Miss Cheryl was good too. The only thing that Miss Cheryl said was that she tend to move her legs when she is presenting and also, towards the end of presenting, it was as though she could not wait to get it over with. Maybe it was because of the nerves, I am sure, after a while of standing in front and presenting in front of the whole class, she would feel more comfortable and she would do great! :)

comment on bonnie

Bonnie uses her HTC handphone to represent herself. Handphone of course has many functions where everyone nowadays depends on it to communicate and sends messages. And she relates of the importance of the handphone to herself. It is very true when i need help, not only me but other people too, she will help when it is within her ability too.

So when the moment she says it, she really shows her expression and emotions, so it do shows the sincerity of her to help people.Therefore, she also says that the handphone has many buttons where it represents she has many friends.

However, if she able to add more varieties in her speeches as she is a really funny person, I think her speech will be great! so keep up the good humour in you Bonnie~!

Comment on Hanz

Hanz talked about her Bangle and how it related to herself.

In my opinion, the way she was able to relate her personality with the bangle was very creative. She said she is strong headed ; the bangle is very hard, she may not be very girlie; the bangle bangle has flowers on it, but it is black.

Overall, she seemed confident although she kept glancing towards the floor quite a number of times. I think if she feels more comfortable standing in front of the class, she'd be able to overcome the nerves.