Persuasive Speech Presentation

Another screwer =(
I think I do it very bad which the common thing happen again!
hand gesture, feet up, talk too soft which people can't hear clearly.
For the speech itself, I think I had mix up the whole things together which there had no flow there. It's like mixing this and that. whole things mix.

For Kiru, it's very nice speech although maybe he is too nervous and sometimes he get stuck but he covered it very fast. He kept walking around, I guess he is too nervous but above all the speech had the flow and it had grab people's attention.

For hadi, I think he is very calm person. But the tone maybe the same so I can't really feel the emotions very much. But his speech is very straightforward and we should proud to become a Malaysian!!

Next would be Sarene, her title is about Chinese will be the international language. For me her sound is too soft for me. But she had a good analysis speech.

Ceci, which I think is quite good, very loud which everyone can hear clearly but it may very distract if the hair keep falls down. But, overall it's a good speech!! =)

Jessine, very clearly that blog is not just for earn money. Agree with that. overall, it's good.

chea, about the cartoon will bring negative impact to kids nowadays. She had attract me because for me she looks, talks in a very calm ways. Also, she using the news and involves her own experience which make the speech more interesting. She is not so nervous and there had some question which can interact with audience..for me is a good presentation.

Yika, always come out with the fresh idea which the title is about metal song, had saw the video that she explain such as "under you skin". For me, I suggest she can do a brief explanation about the song instead of explaining all the details. Maybe she is out of time and she is a bit nervous which she can't manage the details fully. Yika, you didn't really screw up.

Siew Mun, I think she is too nervous and the voice is too soft. Feel like so confident to herself, but is all ok because I did too!!

Christy, good analysis and had been support by the examples. good persentation!! =)

Michelle, she is very calm and loud. People remember her speech. A very nice starting. It's good!!

Su Ann, sorry my wish did't come true but you had a good presentation. Like the sentences for the conclusion, "Everyone is beautiful". Had a good analysis which how media definite the word "Beautiful". Had a good speech.

Mindy, the blackberry as the topic. Agree with all people not necessary to follow the trend or conformity. Like your quote, "when people laugh you are different, you laugh them because they are the same". Nice quote wei!!

Aaron, actually I'm not so understand your topic. Can see that you are very nervous. But you are manage to finish your speech =)

The speech is done!! But not for the documentation. Here is the reminder what you must had for your documentation:

1. Outline of your main points and supporting materials
2. Identification of at least two goals that you have for this speech
3. Identification of a major challenge in accomplishing speech
4. Solutions on overcoming the said challenge
5. Survey complete with answers.
6. Blog post copy

Good job and good luck to everyone!!