First of all, I think that Jacky's topic is an interesting topic. Sex, drugs, rock and roll has been a major issue for all teenagers nowadays. Overall the speech was good, and the points are well delivered as we can understand from his slides already. But I feel that Jacky dint really emphasize on the effects that it brings to the society. Maybe can improve by asking our classmate for examples or point out a current issue that we are facing recently.
Overall, I totally understand the message that you are trying to persuade us and how sex, drugs, rock and roll is an addiction towards teenagers. I would like to say that you did a very good job in delivering the speech and look forward to hear more from you.
-Melvin-
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When Jacky started his presentation, I can see he's so confidence at knowing what is the messages he want to deliver to us, plus with the slides, the points became more convincing.
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