Comments on Jasnitha's persuasive speech

I knew jasnitha since the 1st semester as we join in the same intake but we was not so close but i watch her close by and we shared same subjects, when it comes to presentation we can see each other based on how they do and evaluate them within ourselves. This is our 4th semester and i can tell u presentation skill subject is really helping her out, she don't quit present well in normal classes but based on her recent speech, i can tell that she gained skills in giving speech and stage fright. She used to be scared and nervous coming up in front of many audience but now she really owe's Ms. Cheryl big time. Not bad Jasnitha you are improving but there is minor mistakes you have to repair like breathing properly while presenting or giving speech, pls dont suffocate, cause it scares the audience. Be more confident instead and speak louder so that it would grab the attentions of the audience, because the facts you have attracts people especially me! Keep it up Jasnitha and sorry if i said anything wrong but i was meant to make you a better speaker and improve.