Saturday, September 25, 2010

the reviews of the persuasive speech

sarah- well..sarah topic was stop texting while driving is dangerous. well, her topic was fine just that she lack of expression and if she has varies her voice during presentation, it will be good.

ian- ian can present well if he watch out his posture and stands properly. his topic is good, but and again, he shall speak out loud with confidence so that he can persuades his audience well.

bonnie- if bonnie is more well prepapre for her speech, then her whole presentation will be great. her posture and voice projection is good enough and of cause she has all the expression . so its good. just a lilttle mistakes that she did not prepapre a good topic in other to persuades people about her topic.

hau neng- well, hau neng has the ability to persuades people. so overall his voice and posture was fine. but if he can stay at one position at a time it will be great. as i relaise he move too much at times.. but overall he did a great job.

take all this as compliment for some and some take this as for to improve urself k!

thats all i can remember .lol =)

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